We make a rough main map about it.
After we got the topic, this is our some original ideas. It includes the reason, effect and consequence. The reason have many courses, many materials and much homework. Because we have many courses, we need to take many different books everyday. About effect, if we often have many courses or books, we must have heavy pressure. So it can influence our hobby, health. We don’t have enough time to do something that we like. We have to face much homework. Even our bag don’t have the more place to put other items about our hobbies. If we don’t have a nice grade, and add many courses, much homework and many tests. Gradually we will lose confidence and will not be interested in study.
FEELING :
In modern time, not only adult's press is very heavy, children also. More and more courses, exam,let students don't want to study active.We will think what the courses should we do, and
what we have to do, its not a important thing that we need to do.
I found more and more classmates don't feel happy in school. All day we should face our exam,
score,we find that we have not enough time to do what we like,what we want to do.
what we have to do, its not a important thing that we need to do.
I found more and more classmates don't feel happy in school. All day we should face our exam,
score,we find that we have not enough time to do what we like,what we want to do.

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